Wednesday, April 11, 2007

Choka Poem

Just posted the following poetic blurb on The Choka and I really like it so I'm reproducing it here.

Time crawls parallel to me
Where did you go, love?

Reach across the nothing void
Barely touch your hand

Other dimension splits us
Or just the cell phone

No matter what you're still there
Fading in and out

Flashes and glimpses of you
Somewhere in the world

I like how it reads. I like the time, reaching across and missing each other thing. It felt really good writing it. It feels like everything flows naturally, like it was already part of the landscape; I just happened to make it visible.

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